Paper recieved a poor grade due to professor unable to understand part of it. MLA for mat was not used when that was requested. Attached are some of the comments. I’m not sure the writer had read the book. It refers to the main characters as friends in one sentence and lovers in the very next. First sentence on page 2 does not make any sense. Sentense 2 in that same paragraph needds rewritten. This paper needs rewritten to better show how the book meets the class’s definition of good writing. The paragraph below it what the professor added as moe examples of good writing. In the attachments, the professor highlighted every sentence that had something wrong.
Good writing has a purpose. The author employs proper writing techniques and strategies (attention-getting introduction, transitions, organization/structure, thesis, setting, strong paragraph development, etc.) for the purpose. Good writing contains correct grammar and punctuation. It recognizes the need for audience awareness, including the audience’s knowledge, age, gender, experiences, race, religion, etc. Good writing makes you think!