hi,
kindly see my comments in the file. in genera:
1- some of what is written is not matching with the curriculum.
2- one sections (around half page) need to be re-write.
3-whole paper need to be review and amendment accordingly.
in the attached two file:
A. the paper need to be review.
B. the curriculum for your reference.
please if anything not clear let me know before your start working on the paper.
thanks