For section 2, you have to make the changes from section 1 and incorporate it into section 2. I am going to send the file where my professor gave instructions on what needs to be changed. It will have lines through the needs to be taken out. I am also going to upload the instructions on what to do for section 2 as well. This is what my professor said in the comments as well. “This needs to be rewritten in YOUR own words. Direct quotes should ONLY be used when you cannot paraphrase the information without compromising the integrity of the original source – such as a definition or theory. Direct quotes should be used sparingly and to support specific claims or to provide evidence. It’s also important to properly cite all direct quotes. Instead, you should paraphrase (put into your own words) what you have read and what you have synthesized based on the literature review. Paraphrasing is encouraged as a way to integrate others’ ideas into your own writing and to avoid excessive use of direct quotes. The goal is to show that you understand the source material and can express it in your own words.” My professor also said this, “Students are required to submit revised and corrected sections with the newly written sections for each submission. When submitting Section II, students need to also include the revised and correction Section I along with the newly written Section II in one word document. Failure to submit the revised and corrected sections in each submission will result in an automatic 20-point deduction to the assignment grade.” My professor gave an example on how to do section 2 which is attached below. If you have any questions, comments, or concerns please reach out to me.