hi,
kindly see my comments in the file. in genera:
1- one sections (around one page) need to be re-write and replaced.in page 1.
2- in page 9 need a bit more explanation. Already i wrote a comment there.
3-whole paper need to be review and amendment accordingly.
In the attached two files:
A. the paper which need to be review.
B. the curriculum for your reference.
please if anything not clear let me know before your start working on the paper.
thanks