“I have provided feedback on your assignment.
My feedback identifies patterns in your writing, and I highlight examples from your essay to illustrate those patterns. I do not point to every sentence or word that needs to be changed.
I include written comments. To review my written comments, please click on the Grademark or Turnitin report. Please click on the document twice to populate the blue bubbles with my comments.
Here are my wrap up comments:
Good job including some scholarly sources.
Can you replace outdated sources?
Can you limit your categories to three? This will help you with synthesis because you will have enough sources to talk about similarities and differences that lead to some type of pattern.
Can you continue to work on synthesis? This is the most important aspect of this assignment.
Finally, please make sure to review the rubric.”
The above information is my instructor’s feedback. It seems the biggest note of concern to her is cohesion, sections that read like an informative essay, and out-of-date resources. I have placed in the instructor’s notes as comments on the sections she had noted.
Please follow her notes as best as possible, and most importantly, any change must be made in TRACK CHANGES; otherwise, she will not grade the assignment.
Lastly I have added the rubric containing the instructor feedback please review.
As always thank you!